Writing Concisely Without Losing Academic Rigor: The “Less is More” Rule (2026 Guide)

There is a myth among postgraduate students in Malaysia that “Longer = Better.”

You might think that if you write a 100-word sentence with five syllables in every word, you sound like a Professor. You might think that saying “The utilization of the methodology was implemented” sounds smarter than “I used the method.”

You are wrong.

Examiners at universities like UM, USM, and UPM are busy people. They have to read five theses in a weekend. If they have to read a sentence three times just to understand it, they get annoyed. And annoyed examiners give lower grades.

Academic Rigor is not about using big words or long sentences. It is about Precision.

• Rigor: Being exact, accurate, and undeniable.
• Bloat: Being vague, repetitive, and confusing.

Writing concisely doesn’t mean “dumbing it down.” It means clearing away the jungle so the examiner can see the path.

Here is the definitive guide to cutting the fluff while keeping the A+ quality.

1. Kill the “Zombie Nouns” (Nominalization)

This is the number one enemy of concise writing. “Nominalization” is when you take a perfectly good verb (action word) and turn it into a heavy, boring noun.

The Mistake:

• “We made a decision to…” (3 words)
• “The study conducted an investigation into…” (6 words)
• “This provides a demonstration of…” (4 words)

The Fix: Find the “Zombie Noun” and turn it back into a verb.

• “We decided to…” (1 word)
• “The study investigated…” (3 words)
• “This demonstrates…” (2 words)

Why it increases Rigor: Verbs are powerful. Nouns are static. By using the verb, your writing becomes more direct and confident.

2. Stop “Throat Clearing” (Empty Phrases)

When we are nervous, we clear our throats before speaking: “Ahem, well, you see…” Students do this in writing too. They use “filler phrases” to hide their insecurity.

The Mistake:

• “It is important to note that…”
• “It can be seen from the table that…”
• “There is a significant relationship that exists between…”
• “The purpose of this chapter is to…”

The Fix: Just say it.

• Delete: “It is important to note that the result is significant.” -> Write: “The result is significant.”
• Delete: “It can be seen from Table 4.1 that…” -> Write: “Table 4.1 shows that…”
• Delete: “There is a significant relationship that exists…” -> Write: “A significant relationship exists…”

The Result: You save thousands of words across a thesis, leaving room for more critical analysis.

3. The “Department of Redundancy Department”

In Malaysia, we often use “double words” for emphasis.

• “Advance forward” (Advance implies forward).
• “Collaborate together” (Collaborate implies together).
• “Future plans” (Plans are always for the future).

The Mistake: Using two words when one is enough.

• “The final outcome of the result…”
• “The past history of the company…”
• “The absolute essential condition…”

The Fix: Cut the adjective.

• “The outcome…”
• “The history…”
• “The essential condition…”

Academic Rigor Check: “Absolute essential” sounds emotional. “Essential” sounds precise. Precision is rigor.

4. Active Voice vs. Passive Voice (Again)

Passive voice almost always uses more words.

The Comparison:

• Passive (Wordy): “The survey was distributed by the researcher to the participants.” (10 words).
• Active (Concise): “The researcher distributed the survey to participants.” (7 words).

Savings: 30%. If you save 30% of your words in a 100,000-word thesis, you just saved the examiner from reading 30,000 useless words. They will love you for it.

5. The “In Order To” Trap

This is a specific phrase that plagues academic writing.

• Bad: “We ran a pilot study in order to test the validity.”
• Good: “We ran a pilot study to test the validity.”

Result: Same meaning. Fewer words. Higher impact.

6. Real Examples: Before and After

Let’s look at a typical “Student Draft” vs. a “Professional Edit.”

Student Draft (Bloated & Weak):

“It is worthy of mentioning that the results obtained from the analysis of the data indicated that there was a negative relationship found between the variable of price and the variable of purchase intention.” (36 words. Hard to read. Low rigor because it sounds unsure.)

Professional Edit (Concise & Rigorous):

“The analysis indicated a negative relationship between price and purchase intention.” (11 words. Powerful. Clear. High rigor.)

What changed?

• Removed “It is worthy of mentioning” (Throat clearing).
• Removed “results obtained from the” (Obvious).
• Removed “found between the variable of” (Clutter).

Summary Checklist: The “Lean Writing” Test

Before you submit your chapter, run a Word Count Check. Can you cut 10% without losing meaning?

1. Search for “tion” words: (Investigation, Demonstration). Can you turn them into verbs?
2. Search for “It is”: (It is important, It is clear). Delete them.
3. Search for “There are”: (There are many factors that…). Change to “Many factors…”.
4. Check Adjectives: Did you write “totally unique” or “very critical”? Delete “totally” and “very.”

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